A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
The problem is there is 3 center of interests in this painting. The waterfalls the light rocks on the right side and the cliffs above the fall. Just block off 1/4 of the painting on the right and see how much of a stronger painting you have. I suggest you start over with a stronger composition.
Gorgeous colors here Nanci, very rich. It does seem to be stronger with the top quarter covered, but I think a great painting as it is. I've seen lots of growth in your work lately!!!!