A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
Sunday, December 09, 2007
Wilson Pond
24x36" acrylic on canvas. Finished today. C&C welcome.
Wow Ralph, nice job here. Love the colours and composition. Just one thing though, that tree on the left that seems to join the other tree across the water bothers me a bit. If you could separate those two trees a bit more, it would help a great deal. The dark line of the tree almost goes from bottom to the top and distracts my ey from enjoying the rest of the painting. Just a thought. Otherwise great job here. Your growing rapidly as a painter Ralph! Brian
Wow Ralph, nice job here. Love the colours and composition. Just one thing though, that tree on the left that seems to join the other tree across the water bothers me a bit. If you could separate those two trees a bit more, it would help a great deal. The dark line of the tree almost goes from bottom to the top and distracts my ey from enjoying the rest of the painting. Just a thought. Otherwise great job here. Your growing rapidly as a painter Ralph!
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Thanks Brian!.
ReplyDeleteNice bold colours Ralph! Good one.
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Lovely reflections, Ralph!
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