A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
Tuesday, December 01, 2009
I set up a still life and did the little 16x20" below. I really liked the tangerines, but didn't like the composition. I painted it again on a 24x24" above. This time I liked the composition better but the fruit just isn't as painterly. Ohh well.
Hi Elliot, nice to see you back here. I like this a lot, the colors are great. I think the pinky mish-mash on the left is a bit distracting though. I might have let the white container come all the way to the edge or done something a bit different on the left. Tangerines are right on!!!
The comp works much better on the top one Elliot, you need just a bit of sparkle in those tangerines. Your doing nice work here and I love the warm palette!
Well, for my part I prefer a lot the first one. colors, freshness, the clear red and even the pink mish-mash making spontaneous, even the size of the painting.More life. the one on top is too square to me, too "good child". I feel enclosed. very interesting!
Nice color and brushwork
ReplyDeleteHi Elliot, nice to see you back here. I like this a lot, the colors are great. I think the pinky mish-mash on the left is a bit distracting though. I might have let the white container come all the way to the edge or done something a bit different on the left. Tangerines are right on!!!
ReplyDeleteThe comp works much better on the top one Elliot, you need just a bit of sparkle in those tangerines. Your doing nice work here and I love the warm palette!
ReplyDeleteWell, for my part I prefer a lot the first one. colors, freshness, the clear red and even the pink mish-mash making spontaneous, even the size of the painting.More life.
ReplyDeletethe one on top is too square to me, too "good child". I feel enclosed.
very interesting!