A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
Gorgeous colors here Dave and the comp is great. A bit too abstract for me to figure things out though, would have liked the glass or vases defined just a bit more. Beautiful symphony of brushwork and color.
Hi dave! This is strange, when I looked at it, at first, I thought it was a room with kind of people mooving and this, seen from the ceiling. When I realized it was flowers in a vase it was a bit hard to understand the sens (up or down).I think I would darken the lower left part so we could see better the vase.We need a weight there to camp the subject. And the darker part should make a counterweight to the white of the white flower.But not as dark as the deep blue in the middle of the flowers.It would adds to the comprehension.Your colors are beautiful. If you try it let me know what you think about. bye.
Gorgeous colors here Dave and the comp is great. A bit too abstract for me to figure things out though, would have liked the glass or vases defined just a bit more. Beautiful symphony of brushwork and color.
ReplyDeleteHi dave! This is strange, when I looked at it, at first, I thought it was a room with kind of people mooving and this, seen from the ceiling. When I realized it was flowers in a vase it was a bit hard to understand the sens (up or down).I think I would darken the lower left part so we could see better the vase.We need a weight there to camp the subject. And the darker part should make a counterweight to the white of the white flower.But not as dark as the deep blue in the middle of the flowers.It would adds to the comprehension.Your colors are beautiful. If you try it let me know what you think about. bye.
ReplyDeleteThank you both for your comments ,i appreciate them very much
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