A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
Saturday, March 14, 2009
Red cactus...
24x24 oil/canvas. recovering from a painful virus, attempetd to paint something I could easily from my bedroom, so got the flower pot in and here it is to share...:)
Hi Asma, lovely work here, I love the tonal background and the composition works nicely. Seems a little stiff but I think that's because you defined every leaf and flower and things are fairly hard edeged. Consider not saying everything and maybe leaving a few thing obscure and undefined. Just a thought. Hope you feel better soon. Brian
Thanks Brian for the advice, i couldnt pin point it but knew something was not right. Its staring in the face yet never realized it. Thanks Dave for your continued support, much appreciate it!
Hi Asma, lovely work here, I love the tonal background and the composition works nicely. Seems a little stiff but I think that's because you defined every leaf and flower and things are fairly hard edeged. Consider not saying everything and maybe leaving a few thing obscure and undefined. Just a thought. Hope you feel better soon. Brian
ReplyDeleteSorry your not feeling well , your colors are lovely in this one
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian for the advice, i couldnt pin point it but knew something was not right. Its staring in the face yet never realized it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dave for your continued support, much appreciate it!
I just love your color harmony Asma. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Carolyn!
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