A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
Sunday, February 14, 2010
This is 18x18" acrylic. Would love feedback on this one. One thing in particular... the left-most arm in this one, not sure if that looks way too long.
Hi Elliot. I really like the colors for the water and the grey as shade. Yes, I think for my part that the left arm is a bit too long. Will you work on it?
Hi Joanna,! great to see you back here, this is very exciting, love the hair, skin tones etc in this and the backlight effects. I think I would shorten that far lef arm a bit, super job here!
Thanks everyone. Sorry to disappoint, but it is me Elliot, and not Joanna. Joanna had used my studio computer to check her gmail and this automatically signs her into google products like blogger. Anyway, thanks again for the help... i'll go back in and fix that arm.
This is 18x18" acrylic. Would love feedback on this one. One thing in particular... the left-most arm in this one, not sure if that looks way too long.
Hi Elliot. I really like the colors for the water and the grey as shade. Yes, I think for my part that the left arm is a bit too long. Will you work on it?
ReplyDeleteHi Joanna,! great to see you back here, this is very exciting, love the hair, skin tones etc in this and the backlight effects. I think I would shorten that far lef arm a bit, super job here!
ReplyDeleteLovely colors here Joanna! You might define the face of the boy on the right a little more, and then work the arms again.
ReplyDeleteThis painting is signed by Elliot but posted by you?
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone. Sorry to disappoint, but it is me Elliot, and not Joanna. Joanna had used my studio computer to check her gmail and this automatically signs her into google products like blogger. Anyway, thanks again for the help... i'll go back in and fix that arm.
ReplyDeletevery nice loose brushwork and subdued color
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