A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
Hi Asma, I like your little studies here. The reflections in the teapot are great, but the ice cool blue in the shadow is a bit distracting. I would gray the blue a bit. The roses one, I like the colors, again, that icy blue on the bowl is a little loud. Also having the roses right at the bottom and the edge of the table at 50% up the canvas presents some composition issues. Other than that, I like what you did here. I've seen a lot of improvement in the short time you've been on the blog here. Brian
Yeah, the shadow is a little strange, but other than that, I love the top one. Great work. The lemons are awesome, and you did a super job on the metal.
Hi Asma, I like your little studies here. The reflections in the teapot are great, but the ice cool blue in the shadow is a bit distracting. I would gray the blue a bit.
ReplyDeleteThe roses one, I like the colors, again, that icy blue on the bowl is a little loud. Also having the roses right at the bottom and the edge of the table at 50% up the canvas presents some composition issues.
Other than that, I like what you did here. I've seen a lot of improvement in the short time you've been on the blog here.
Brian
Yeah, the shadow is a little strange, but other than that, I love the top one. Great work. The lemons are awesome, and you did a super job on the metal.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful color in these i especially love the teapot
ReplyDeleteThankyou all, Brian, Elliot and Dave. No idea how much your feedback means and helps me. thanks :)
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ReplyDeleteYour stainless cofee pot is very welldone - brilliant. I agree with Brian about the colour of the shadow.
Khanzaman