A FORUM OF DISCUSSION, CRITIQUE AND SHARING WITH CANADIAN ARTIST BRIAN SIMONS. THE ARTIST'S WORK CAN BE SEEN AT HIS OFFICIAL WEBSITE: http://www.briansimons.com
Thursday, December 11, 2008
16x20 oil on canvas. love some feedback...took me longer than expected ...dont know why.
Great job here Asma, just think you need a couple of dark notes on the back of the red car. It will make the red pop a bit more. Really nice feel to this and love your tree. Brian
I really don't think this very often, but there's a nice VanGogh quality about this one (in the rail cars especially) for me. Engaging twilight feel to it.
That one little hit of bright light-violet at the bottom center-right is a bit distracting for me. That's being picky though.
Thanks Brian and Elliot. I'll take your advice and put some darks. Looking at it for so long makes one blind at times to the most obvious. thanks guys.
I really like the path and the interest you have create with colour. I completely understand when you have been looking at it for too long, but I don't feel I can add any clarity.
Great job here Asma, just think you need a couple of dark notes on the back of the red car. It will make the red pop a bit more. Really nice feel to this and love your tree. Brian
ReplyDeleteI really don't think this very often, but there's a nice VanGogh quality about this one (in the rail cars especially) for me. Engaging twilight feel to it.
ReplyDeleteThat one little hit of bright light-violet at the bottom center-right is a bit distracting for me. That's being picky though.
Thanks Brian and Elliot. I'll take your advice and put some darks. Looking at it for so long makes one blind at times to the most obvious. thanks guys.
ReplyDeleteI really like the path and the interest you have create with colour. I completely understand when you have been looking at it for too long, but I don't feel I can add any clarity.
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